All Comments on 'Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
impressed

It's quite good

It leaves you curious

I mean I read this when I was like so horny and needed something. But it's little eroticism didn't disappoint me at all.

recontailrecontailalmost 11 years ago
Great Story

Looking forward to seeing more of the world your creating.

ErinaceousErinaceousalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Recontail and Anonymous

Thanks for your comments. Sorry I haven't responded before to your encouragement but I thought I would write much more quickly and let the story be my thanks. I hope you are still enjoying it.

Regards,

Erinaceous.

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 9 years ago
Lots of details

Yet even more mysteries to delve into, fun stuff!

Jason

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 8 years ago
You really...

need to expand the tag list. It was pure a accident I found this story.

Another interesting chapter. But, why did he crash ? When it happened exactly as he predicted it would. What was all that testing for ?

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 2 years ago

My second time round (anonymous before) still a good story, plus I’m a vocab tart, and any story with words like “Benignant” within it will nearly always get my approval and 5* for effort!

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I've just submitted my 2021 Geek Pride story to be published in May. It's the 2020 story that I never finished. The title is 'We are such stuff'. The story is 18,500 words long and is written in an odd style as an experiment: all dialogue and no narrative. I'm still slowly ...

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