All Comments on 'Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 03'

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JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 9 years ago

More fun with the characters, I look forward to where you're leading this :)

Jason

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 8 years ago
Good...

world building. The "tribe" is a lot more civilized than I expected.

JC_The_ContinuerJC_The_Continuerover 7 years ago
a little fast in spots but overal good

JC

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorabout 7 years ago
Very good to be back

in the company of the gentle (and some not-so-gentle! ) Woodlanders.

It's fun to read this with a bit of foreknowledge to color some of the first encounters with characters I know much more about in later chapters :D

M

maddictmaddictalmost 5 years ago
Soon to be discovered

I think I'm going to like it here. Ezra you won't be able to hide your morning excitement for long. I wonder if you might be traded or stolen or

LooselyhumanLooselyhumanabout 2 years ago

Too much wishful thinking on the body type ideals, sorry.

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I've just submitted my 2021 Geek Pride story to be published in May. It's the 2020 story that I never finished. The title is 'We are such stuff'. The story is 18,500 words long and is written in an odd style as an experiment: all dialogue and no narrative. I'm still slowly ...

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