All Comments on 'Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 11'

Thanks for writing it.

I like the story a lot. It has me wondering though, how can you keep the roles and relationships of so many characters straight. There have to be over 25 characters named all together and their names, titles, relationships, skills, like and dislikes makes a heck of a database. Spreadsheet much?

Thanks,

MORE MORE MORE!!!

So many details so well done!

This chapter really brought out some great personalities and resolved some conflicts that could have been really bad for the tribes... for everyone really.

Keeping Ezra away from the cloners was masterful.

Thanks for writing!

Jason

11 chapters in and I'm thoroughly addicted, can't put it down. As a fellow author on this site, I can only hope to keep my readers this engaged. A fantastic effort so far, imaginative and compelling. The characters have drawn me in and the ever-changing circumstances keep me guessing. Great work!!

Dom

Nice to see many resolutions - even knowing some don't last. It's that calm before the the storm feeling and I'm enjoying the anticipation.

J