All Comments on 'Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 18'

I had been looking forward to this very much and it was a great read as usual. 5/5

Seeing how you brought in a new character with a medical background, I expect to see a (wo)manned expedition in the near future to save Annela. And I'm eager to read about it.

Thanks so much for this large chapter. I look forward to reading it. When you have a gap between submissions, it would be great to have a short recap at the beginning of the chapter (which those reading back-to-back chapters later could just skip). I can't remember where you left the characters last time and have to do some review. Either way though -- I am looking eager to get started.

Waiting a long time for this one glad to see it at last, looking forward to the next chapter in the near future I hope.

I'm loving this story, that you have such a large cast of characters yet still manage to weave their individual stories into the greater whole is impressive to say the least.

One thing I was wondering about was if it would be possible in your sub-chapter headings to add a time stamp. Not like X day, X month, X year, but like X months or years after crash (or AC for short). Just to make it easier to keep track of the timeline between Ezra and Danielle.

Great story development. Eager for next chapter.

Thanks everyone for your support.

TheTorontoGuy:

I find it difficult to write 'In the story so far' sections, though I have done some, because I don't know what to include without giving away what will happen. But I'll look at doing one for the next chapter - and if I re-issue the story (with corrections), I may do one for every chapter.

Anonymous comment about the timelines:

Thanks. I admit, when I started, I had the timelines of Ezra and Danielle in pretty good order but recently I've left some dates (and ages of children, for example) vague because I don't want to be constrained. It's a good idea to add the dates to the sub-headings but I can't promise to do it. I will make more mentions in each part of the story when the events are meant to be happening. I hope that will make things clearer.

You write a wonderful and interesting story ,In my mind this is one of the Best storys here on Literotica . I hope you continue this exciting Story in the near Future.

I'm an impatient sort. The banter and science makes this Heinlein-esque for me. Brava! I'm honestly kinda impatiently skipping the sex scenes to get to the good stuff!! (Not that those lack.....)

Great story, when's the next one?

It's been a while since the last update. Any idea when the next chapter might be out?

Thanks for the comments. I've had a long break but the next chapter is in progress. sorry I can't say when I'll be done but not too long, I hope.

Read all the chapters 1 - 18. Really enjoyed the story.. I am waiting for your next installment!

Waiting impatiently for the next installment. How does your tale end, storyteller?

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The discoveries made by Tamar and Wildchild were wonderful to read, the height of real love - one that evolves to support and lift up rather than demand and hold back.

Another stunning chapter with a veritable feast of events, character growth and a steadily forward plot. Really enjoying your work Erin, thanks!

Jason