All Comments on 'Everybody Loves Raymond: Amy's Ann'

For me the story really starts to take off in the second half. The sexual acts that are being done to Debra is some powerful stuff to read, with my favorite being the section of Amy fisting Debra. You show very good description and emotion in your writing.

Some ideas for future stories,

I would love to see you continue the babysitter story or any theme where Debra takes charge of a younger female teen.

Another idea that would be interesting - Debra and Marie. Debra has finally had enough, it's time for her to take all of her frustrations out on Marie. Without any remorse she treats her like a two dollar whore and owns her like a slave.

Thanks for all of your Debra stories!

Superb again. I hope Debra goes on and on spreading love to all. She'll soon be in the "Mature" category which opens up a whole new dimension for her as her sons grow older bringing their friends round ?