by GeorgeDaBuilder
The past participle of drag is dragged, not drug.
The story's OK, a bit cliched but then it's a sex story so it's hard not to be. Does Britt really need to have so many earth-shattering orgasms? Maybe I'm just not doing it right.
I never did take any grammar classes in school, so I just write like I talk. Knowing the rules would have helped when I tried to learn a foreign language, but so be it.
As far as Britt and her orgasms; well she is a different kind of girl.