All Comments on 'Everybody Needs a Hobby Ch. 03'

by GeorgeDaBuilder

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

The past participle of drag is dragged, not drug.

The story's OK, a bit cliched but then it's a sex story so it's hard not to be. Does Britt really need to have so many earth-shattering orgasms? Maybe I'm just not doing it right.

GeorgeDaBuilderGeorgeDaBuilderalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the input

I never did take any grammar classes in school, so I just write like I talk. Knowing the rules would have helped when I tried to learn a foreign language, but so be it.

As far as Britt and her orgasms; well she is a different kind of girl.

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