by GeorgeDaBuilder
Chapter 5 of this epic story is compelling storytelling, a perfect interweaving of love, romance, a beautifully written (if too brief) erotic scene, and an excellent plot. Five stars.
Well, I managed to the fifth chapter and that's all for me, sorry. Your story is simply too unreal. Maybe other readers will enjoy it more than me. Thanks anyway.
Perfect blend of romance and heat. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Hi - great work so far ... don't keep us waiting for more, please!!