by KnottLynnHardey
Thanks, I enjoyed it. The character was different, and I liked the combination of public sex and virginity. I linked to your other story about Shelby which was also good. Write more in the first time genre.
I cannot think of relevant superlatives to express my love of this story!! I loved the visuals. I loved the way I was party to her thoughts and feelings. I especially loved how I was drawn into her sensory experiences during, as well as, before and after her 'encounters". I will, without a doubt, be looking into more of your writing...although I cannot fathom that they will be as sublime as this tale!
Great to hear from a woman's perspective and that you don't use the standard script for the fucking scenes. Well done.