All Comments on 'Everything for the Career Ch. 07'

What an exponentially growing soap opera! Wtf Charlene as a low end street hooker. Gah! The messianic complex and then guilt was frustrating to watch. At least Bernie had her consider the possibility that she loses everything. There are other jobs and banks. Wtf. On the flip side, if he knew the choice she.made for him, woukd it kill him for her to try for a couple weeks to negotiate a deal? Her decision and choice is what counts here and her steadfastness to never relapse. It isn't like she has to live like a devoted servant the rest of their lives. So many histrionics. No middle ground. No compromise. Yikes!

By the end, I just wanted it to end. The writing isn't very smooth and it reads like a draft instead of a finished product.

I liked this story. The ebb and flow, back and forth.