All Comments on 'Everything that Glitters Ch. 02'

I wish when stories change categories there is a way to follow. Found this when I was looking to see if there was more to the story printed yet. Happened to do a search for the name of the story and found it here. So Dad has her and is drugging her up again. What an outstanding piece of garbage he is. awaiting for more.

I about gave up hope on this sequel. I enjoy your stories.

Excellent story! Loving it, both chapters. 5 BIG STARS!

Great addition to the story line. I knew something was going to happen. Real pucker time cliff hanger ending. That "Daddy" needs some comeuppance hopefully in the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing and looking forward to chapter 3.

Cheers

SAGE

Excellent follow up to the 1st part. It’s disappointing that Cassie avoided her ex and daughter for 2 years, after establishing contact. Terribly selfish.

Love it, you detail it perfectly! Just can not wait for more.

Now comes the most interesting part!

Love it

Interesting so far, gave this chapter a 4. Cassie is an interesting character, part of me hates her and thinks Zane and Casey should run far far away but part of me thinks she might really be trying. Look forward to the next chapter and might even up the score depending on how it goes.

I love it… Waiting for more.

For the little girl’s sake, I hope her mother is alive but no matter how much repenting she did; she still broke her vows, whores around on her husband and abandoned her child and husband.

Oh, we'll kill the fatted calf when Cassie shows up!" David replied,

and that did it for me....why kill a baby calf for humans to be happy.? how disgusting we as humand have become.... one day will come when animals will say...lets kill the fattened human baby for the homecoming of our people!