All Comments on 'Everything that Glitters Ch. 03'

Please!!! more.

Only 4 stars because you did not hook them back together. That was disappointing

I know that you said this was the final chapter, but I don't think you have done the story justice with this ending. There seem to be a few loose ends that need cleaning up. :) I know that I would enjoy reading the actual final chapter!

Enjoying the story. Hope you keep it rolling.

Please finish it

Don't mess it up now by letting something come crashing down. This isn't T.V. Great Story so far 5*

Wow. Not good.

Please finish this one with a HEA, Your readers have been waiting for it!

Great story, Hoss, but it deserves a proper ending. I feel like I am dangling 20 feet in the air.

Cheers

SAGE

I am not sure what this turning into... It feels not complete and no good or bad ending, if this is the end. More like roll reversal with no completion.

Again, great chapter. Zane is human with flaws to prow it. Going back on tour sounds like a mistake for him. Even considering childcare is good, not having Casey around will rattle in his head, can become a distraction. In the ring, it can get him badly injured.

I'm not sure how wise it is to go for another year How do I can't tell you why I see real danger in that.

He's just spent 4 years raising his daughter and she's used to having him there all the time now hes gonna be gone for an entire year more or less..... Just like her mother was?

Seems like an extremely imprudent and short sighted decision for where I'm sitting.

WOW! Nice way to win me over to Cassie's corner! Full marks!

Sadly, the story has been going downhill with each chapter. Considering it didn't exactly start strong, that's really not a good thing. This chapter was predictable and unbelievable more so than anything else.