All Comments on 'Eve's Seduction of Adam'

What a wonderful story! I believe you are right that this story could actually happen and totally legal. I’m an Engineer so don’t take my word for it.

A few glaring typos, miss placed words, etc but not enough to affect the enjoyment of the wonderful story. Much better than others here on Literotica. For what I pay to enjoy the stories I don’t complain!

It’s a 5 star story for me! Thanks for sharing your fantasy and writing skill with us, your fans!

Cheers

SAGE

Great story! Poor Adam never stood a chance. Eve is a sly vixen who gets what she wants. What will Adam do when she wants more young ones?

I really enjoyed it, but it really belonged in erotic coupling or mature. In Eve's own words, this was not incest. Now if Adam and Peter had walked in on Eve straddling Jan's face... By the way, nice insertion of Jan Brady's real name, Eve. Mostly only us from that era would know that.

Jedd

I have to agree with the others. Very well written, and totally believable on all sub plots. Look forward to a possible part two, and finally finding out what secret Eve has been hiding about her 'real' daddy. You hinted at it a few times, but never gave up the secret. As for it being in the wrong category, I disagree, as perhaps it wasn't incest per se, but it was still taboo for sure. Great writing, easy to read...keep up the great work.

If it were me, and I speak very personally here, I think Adam has the better deal here I prefer a nice slim compact body, particularly if it comes with red or blonde hair attached, oh, and a nice smile.

Nice touch with using the Brady names. Peter, Cindy, Jan & Eve (name of the actress who played Jan).