All Comments on 'Evil Bitch Ch. 14'

I've completely lost interest at this point. You've received a lot of feedback from people saying "less tech, more sex", but you keep going more tech/less sex in each episode. You've also received comments saying that if you have to include footnotes/summaries/etc at the beginning, you're diving in too deep.

I hope you can fix some of those for those who stick around.

Write the story you want to write, not the one that people think they want to read.

Keeping up with your mind isn't easy, lol. More sex may mean more pages per chptr , but it is your story and I'm hooked so please keep the story coming. Love mom's new self hahah. I wish there was a button to hit so when you want to keep up with a story, then you get an in house email that another chapter has been released. Anyway great job,/ bill

Has it been stated yet why Nyarlathotep wanted Jon to collect the stones or was it just a mission to get him killed?

Now that the Mother of evil (what ever her name is) is wanting him to do work for her, will she be able find him if he stays out of the nether world.

What puzzles me is I can remember Nyarlathotep's name but not the mother of evil's name.

I find that I get hung up on some of the words and have to go back and read over the part that I didn't completely understand.

I've said it before and I'm saying it again, "I'd hate to have the author's nightmares."

Thanks for the read.

This is your story .Not ours . Awesome i might add . What bothers me is that some people start bitching about this and that and before you know it the author has had enough and says fuck it and quits writing or takes forever in between chapters . So if you don't like the way this author is writing HIS stories you have the option not to read it . Is that so hard . Its not like you are paying for it . Anyway thanks Lostboy for another great chapter to read .

excellent keep up the fantastic work

its been almost a month since you posted anything please post soon

Its been 6 weeks and Im hoping that a new chapter is close to coming out! I also hope your doin ok and the extra time its taking for cptr 15mearly translates to an extra long chapter coming. Maybe more than 1 day in the chapter, LOSTBOY, you have a great interestingly addictive story here, I only hope you well and your fingers are flying across the keyboard , lol ? / signed: deep into withdrawals bill

please write more...its an awesome storyline with awesome action

Finally the Dom emerges.