Evil Bitch

Although there is no character development nor plot, I enjoyed the 1st chapter. In real life, no man could get so lucky. As an avid reader of mother/son incestuous love stories, this story is a complete change of pace. Everyone has sexual relations withut any concern. Except for the mother's emotional loss due to the lack of affection from her husband, no one appeaars to be sexually repressed. There is not the least bit of hestitation when it come to sex. Due to the uniqueness of the story and resolving reasonable doubt in favor of the author, I rated this chapter 5 stars.

Was there a plot? Why was he in prison? Why does he say evil bitch? What's up with the sisters? This just drop this in the action and did nothing to give any context.

Why the hell would you call this story “Evil Bitch” and then not bother describing any of this evilness?

Besides that your stories read like frat boy bragging but without the other bros around to yell “bullshit!” when it gets too implausible.

Unfortunately, I must agree with TattooTales comments.. I too gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The grammar/spelling errors are what they are. It's got some hot moments. It's not very believable, though, which took me out of the story. Every woman seems pretty interchangeable rather than their own person. They all want their asses fucked, all are incredible cocksuckers, and all just seem to be there for the MC's enjoyment. It doesn't ruin the story, but I could only go four stars.

That was one hell of a start, I'm not sure how much more crazy can it get but I can't wait to find out.

Some of them were actually correct. If you're referring to a polytheistic religion gods would be right. In that case Gods should be gods. Mom would only be capitalized as a form of address "hey, Mom..." but not when just referring to her "his mom opened the door".

As for the "getting ate out", while it is incorrect, it was also a quote from the character who probably isn't that concerned with grammar, especially right then.

As the title says, I loved the story, it's very hot.

I assume (Perhaps wrongly), that some of the background will be explained later... especially why all women in the story seems to fall over their feet to fuck the guy.

Fun, but not really believable ;)

Despite the errors, I rate it as a 5 star story

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But most of Wordsmith's list of errors did not affect the readability of the story, and it would have been better to send them to the author as Feedback - posting them publicly in the comments is just showing off.