All Comments on 'Evil Secretary Ch. 01'

Well it had potential but then you sort of had a brain fart at the end. Really stupid ending.

This story was definitely fucked up. You need to use a little bit of "spell check" and "punctuation check" as well, as your misspelling and incorrect punctuation fucks up the story further. You could have made a very good "100" erotic story if you had put your mind to it. Otherwise, don't used up Literotica space over such horseshit!

Glad she's on the road to replacing an alcoholic cheating bitch. Haza

What a great beginning! I love this secretary already and can relate to her in a lot of ways. She is a great character, a little full of herself and her power, but I guess the rest of the series will reveal if her cockiness is justified or not! -- JB

The author is meaner than the sceming secretary. He made us believe the evil secretary would win, but then suddenly terminates the story like pulling a rug from underneath our feet. Not nice!