All Comments on 'Evolution of Keri'

by jackie_em

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too real

It got too real and killed my vibe

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

please never write another story

JessicaAlexanderJessicaAlexanderover 4 years ago
Not spank material but loved it!

If you have a trans fetish and looking for spank stories, this isn’t it. If you are trans, you can probably relate to much of it. This story barely touches the tip of the iceberg of pain, loss and hassle that most go through.

metroalmametroalmaover 4 years ago
What do the anonymous folks want?

This story has what it promised. It is sweet, it is sexy even if it moves a little fast and too smoothly. If you want to read self loathing stories stick to user names like "Sissyspunkeater"

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 4 years ago
loving and sweet

Lovely story about just finding happiness .. please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Over used phrases

Made me hard but that still doesn't mean I don't think you over used several phrases; girly clothes, girl clothes, etc. Your 'reluctant to believe this is happening to me' girly boy was over the top. Still made me hard though. Tear out 15% of the story and it would read much better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
more

I like it. You should continue writing more.

AppreciativeReaderAppreciativeReaderover 4 years ago
VERY SWEET

Keri reminds me very much of my fist transgender girlfriend. My respect for her courage is unending. We are no longer a couple but still good friends.

Thank You for writing this story Jackie_em.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I liked it very much.

I would like to see another chapter. Keri has evolved and is getting married. Can a new chapter show her family evolving to accept Keri as a wife and possibly a mother?

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