by cockforplay66
It seemed choppy and completely implausible to me that this evening couple is suddenly having no holds barred sex. Most of the time I can suspend disbelief, but not today.
Just like to say thank you to Anonymous for the feedback "Just Couldn't Get In to It" - I value your comment, and I accept that it may not be what everyone wants to read. I hope you have found something more to your liking.
Proofread, not just spell check. Good story hard to follow sometimes but good overall. Two thumbs up