All Comments on 'Excite'

I enjoyed this story! I like the style of writing. It was a bit short but I hope to see more from you soon! :)

I absolutely loved this! You can actually feel the tension building up. Perfect choice of words. I really hope you're going to post more of this.

Such a beautiful and eloquent build-up. Please write more.

5 stars, of course! I was so afraid after reading "Heat" but you did not disappoint. This is beautifully crafted, careful and precise, elegant prose. Your writing is stunning.