All Comments on 'Executive Platinum Ch. 11'

Great! You've assembled a cast of characters it would be hard not to like. And your plots just flow. I look foward to hearing more about Gloria, Jim and friends.

gives a Magi headaches and heartaches, TK U MLJ LV NV

coupled with an intelligent PHD leads to several themes to move the story, TK U MLJ LV NV

Is there any more? I hope so, as i was kept guessing what was the next twist!

Keep writing this story! I love it.

I loved your wonderful story. I am seventy and I agree with you that nobody taught

me what women liked. It took many years and a wonderful wife to learn half of what

all men should know. please continue with this story and it may help some younger

people learn to listen to each other.

Well, this story is in a good place at the moment, but it's certainly not finished - too much is missing for that.

Having said that, the past eleven chapters were great! It was at times a bit too heavy on descriptive sex for my preferences, but that's what you get here on Literotica in the Erotic Couplings category, so I understand it perfeclty well.

Thanks for sharing!

Up to this point, this story is terrific, but please don't stop. The ending is WAY too abrupt! I wanna know what happens to these folks!