All Comments on 'Exhibitionist Little Sister Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Looking forward to Ch 2.

I enjoyed this chapter very much. Looking forward to Ch . 2 (and more I hope)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very nice. I'd love to live this.

This is so close to a fantasy I've had for so long, it's not even funny. Except in my fantasy, the male doctor undresses me and makes me expose myself during my appointment. Very nice story, it got me thinkng again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Oh My God

Awesome....... Just the right amount of sexual tension and then release, the lead up to this being a multiple part story I just cant wait to read.

Please hurry

u_chi_chi_manu_chi_chi_manalmost 14 years ago
can't wait

for another chapter of this one! Great job!

northlandkiwinorthlandkiwialmost 14 years ago
GREAT

this story is awesome , well written and structured :)

Cant wait for part two

Thanks

SFAuthorSFAuthoralmost 14 years ago

Can't wait for part 2! Nice job.

tinman69stinman69salmost 14 years ago
Excellent story!

This one too, begs to be finished, and finished soon! (Before I forget it and have to re-read it!) You are good at doing the descriptions of the activities and I respect that a lot. Keep up the good ...no, ... EXCELLENT work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good writing and pacing, just a ridiculous premise

Good writing and pacing, just a ridiculous premise

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
BLOWING MY MIND UP

PLEASE CONTINUE STORY SOON. BEFORE MY MIND BLOWS UP TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. AND AT NEXT DOCTOR VISIT. LOVED IT!!!!

hongluobohongluoboalmost 14 years ago
I love this story!!

Please do continue !! is just so sweet.. and so sexy and so wonderful... nice build up!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
well done, nice build up more please

you need to add more what a tease

WinkWink19WinkWink19almost 14 years ago
:)

Great job, this story is begging to have more written!

pops_60pops_60almost 14 years ago
Very Good Story

Like other coments I liked the story and hope to seee you expand on it. Show some of the things Rob does to help her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
She sounds so sexy

I so enjoyed reading the stroy so far that I do hope more is going to be posted soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
AMAZING

This story was the best I have ever seen in the Taboo section please give us a Ch 02.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot Hot!

Can't wait to read the next chapter when they get home.

Excellent story, Thanks!

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 13 years ago
Great story

What a fantastic start cant wait to read much more!

AceStrokerAceStrokerover 13 years ago
Nice

I'd love to find a doctor who instructed me to undress my little sister.

Are they in the yellow pages? Very well written with nice build up. Can't wait to read the second installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Job

Please keep the writing up and give us a second Chapter your good

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

please keep going. I cant wait to find out what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very good!!!

A great build up and story. When is the next part coming out?

firstfleetfirstfleetover 12 years ago
Excellent!

The first chapter in what I hope is a much longer tale.

Suggestion--"pique," not "peak" and "faze," not "phase."

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Extremely EROTIC, wonderful!!!

I was adjusting my cock half way through the story and almost had an accidental ejaculation before finishing the last paragraphs. Very well written, nice lead in. All of your stories are very well done, but this one will be exceptional. Please post the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
request for ch2

Love the story. Let Cassie keep the bush! It's hot in this story and would be great to expose to others.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
exhibitionist sister

Wow, not my cup of tea, so to speak, but still an erotic story. Trim her hair some but not all at first. Maybe later in another chapter. And, when is the next chapter coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I had to stop reading when I got to the line about "compulsory exhibitionist." I was laughing too hard to continue. I don't think compulsory is the word you were looking for. Compulsive, maybe?

SaintisidoreSaintisidoreabout 12 years ago
More

I love the story. Finish it please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Pretty good story. I'd like to see what direction you take it in. Please put up more.

klosetp3rvklosetp3rvover 11 years ago
More

Please continue this story

rhimshot415rhimshot415about 11 years ago
A Different Kind of Story

RandomAuthor has come up with a different kind of story than is usually encountered in this genre. By combining exhibitionism with submissiveness in a brother-sister incest situation, what results is a story that will be interesting to follow as future episodes are published. Anyone who enjoys this genre of stories will truly enjoy this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A gentle request

Need to finnish this very compelling, sexy, story.

unicorn64unicorn64over 10 years ago

I love it. I hope ch2 is done and I can read it. I have to find out how the next phase if little sister turns out. great story.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 10 years ago
well started

Keep it up for at least 2 more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Loved the story

I think there is a lot of room for more adventures, and I would love to read about them. Great story!!!

SWIM21SWIM21about 10 years ago
Please continue!

Holy shit this story was hot! While the thing with the therapist was a definite stretch from an ethical standpoint, that part was completely blown away by the rest of it. Loved the 'soft-Dom' interplay between the older brother and the younger sister. It's so much better to punish out of love than the desire to harm for its own sake.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Where is the rest?!?!?!

I really loved this story, but where is the next chapter???? I have been looking and I'm not having any luck at all :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Story Write More Chapters

Hot hot hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

This was so amazing and sweet and I just need another chapter, please another chapter. Rob is just the sweetest, everyone should have a brother that loves them that much. Please write more.

Rapier875Rapier875over 8 years ago
Nice story.

Just a shame you never finished it !

nikkolausnikkolausabout 8 years ago
why stop?

Why is there no second part to this!? It started off so great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
WTF!

Why did you stop?

It was brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I like the story telling, it was sexy with a different edge to it.. Please continue the story ASAP.... Very good and the dialogue was excellent.. One of the best I've read on this site.. Keep up the good work and get chapter 2 written. It's a 5 star story

pure12pure12about 7 years ago
Great subject, great writing

Looking forward to future episodes on this story, thank you very much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
omfg

If you don't continue this story, I'll lose it! Bookmarking!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fuck, just when it was getting great, fuck fuck fuck

Great story add a more chapters please add more fucking chapters, I was on the edge of my seat with this story,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Wonderful start, but many more chapters needed to explore this story! Please continue ASAP!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Finish

It is very poor to publish before you finish

xavierwxavierwover 4 years ago
No You DIDN'T!!

I keep looking and looking but can't find Chapter 2!! WTW!?? Please tell me it's in final review before you release it TOMORROW!

Very good job, though it reminds me of another story here - ANOTHER favorite of mine!

Keep up the good work! (And FINISH CHAPTER TWO!!) ;-)

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 4 years ago
keep the bush!

just trim it up neatly. grown women need pubic hair or they look like young girls. a neat bush looks a lot better than no bush.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Kind Brother

A very gentle story, unique, and one that certainly deserved a Sequel. Thanx for the Read, and hope that you return to this special story again.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 2 years ago

Great start but so disappointed that there isn't a second chapter as promised. Not sure if you do this on purpose or are just too busy to write the next chapters for your stories. Have to take away at least one star for telling us "To be continued..." and then not following up so we know if Cassie and Rob take it to the next step in her recovery.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Unrealistic set up. Couldn't get into it at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"To be Continued"??

RegginufRegginufover 1 year ago

I absolutely love this story please give us the next chapter ASAP. Can’t wait to read it

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Another unbelievable story that would NEVER take place. It'd be fun to fantasize it though.

uncomonnerduncomonnerd7 months ago

another unfinised storie by Random author

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This a good fantasy story. It does not need to continue. A conclusion has been established; Rod and Cassie will have this brother - sister incestuous relationship till she has "recovered". I would title the next/last chapter "Cassie's Recovery". You can fantasize as to the text of the story.

Bro_4_SisBro_4_Sis5 months ago

Please find the time to continue this story. The readers here would so enjoy it. Thank you, in advance!

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