All Comments on 'eXile'

Is Chapter 7 missing?

not sure why this is 4*. It's a little verbose, but the writing is done well. Good job. I look forward to the next chapter.

Tell me this is going to continue, that was so amazing. I want to hear Lisa's excuse and see how Sara finally seduces Casey. Fabulous writing and you have captured me and I'm going for the rest of your stories next.

Love this build up.

How long until the next chapter?

continue please

Whether you end it here or take to the next step, I thought you did yourself justice with this story. I always thought the basis of a good story is when you get the reader to let their imagination complete the story. Your story does that.

I liked the way this is starting out, I do hope there is a revenge aspect coming to Lisa and Nick.

Well that was...abrupt. I was enjoying what was there, but I can't really say that on it's own it constitutes a full story. And with no mention of a next chapter, or even so much as a 'to be continued' I have to assume that is what it was intended to be. I could care less about a lack of 'stroke material' but a lack of plot resolution or character growth is kind of a big deal.

Also what's with the title? Seems to refer to Lisa, but I really couldn't tell.

On a more positive note, Casey's reaction to her infidelity is one of the more realistic ones I've read. Just a complete shutdown of emotion is how I imagine most of us(men and women) would react in a moment like that.

Oh please, when does the next part come? I just want to read on, and on...

Great Job!

Oh yes it has been far too long that I have read a quality fic in the Taboo section, with respect to some of the other quality writers.... Looking forward to chapter two very soon...

I am also. A Peach man always have been. If you don’t know what I mean , I mean I’ve always been an ass man. Big bro certainly got a nice look at his sexy little sister sweet peach, did he not? 10/10

And know that there is the cutest baby bird... His life depends on you!

Just started so the story part is yet to occur, but am really confused with the way you made him act. He walked out on her. It was his apartment and everything except her clothing, I guess, he paid for. Why did he leave. He should have packed her clothes and kicked her out with the parting line, "If you are quick enough you can catch up with your new boyfriend." As he locked her out, still only wearing panties.

Nice one...and leave us smoldering!!!

Dang. Looking for hopefully another chapter or 3.

The first thing I'd like to say is that your story is fairly well written and I look forward to a continuation.

For the moment I'll just say that after such a pretentious introduction you could have at least used a spell checker, and I'm not even curious as to what the little bird thing was about.

Thank you for sharing.

Great start to the story. Gutted it ended when it did. Looking forward to the next part!

Please continue your story!

More chapters please

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WTF?!!! That was too good!! You just can't leave it like this!!! Oh yeah...5 stars.

I am direly waiting for the next cheaper

Alright bring the next chapter.

shaide87 didn’t finish his story, making him tonight’s biggest loser

Sorry, 3 stars. There isn’t even a hint that the story will ever be completed. Not done! A little piece of the story with no ending is not a story. Is there anymore coming?

Otherwise I enjoyed this part of your story. Please finish it.

Please hurry

This could have been a really exceptional story...

A really good story that needs finishing. At present it goes nowhere.

So come on author, another chapter to two please you have so many different avenues you can follow with this story, just do it.

Because it’s unfinished state detracts from the story plus the fact O hate unfinished stories this tale attracts a score of 2/5

Please finish this!

FTDS

This has potential to be one of my favorite stories from you! I really hope you write some chapters.

Really really hope you decide to continue this. You’ve really got something here my friend

This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read here, please write some more, it needs a conclusion

Ugh! There are so many incomplete and abandoned stories on this site! Wish there was a giant label on the stories so we could all know not to waste our time reading something that is unfinished.

I love the way this author writes... but the amount of unfinished introduction-pieces he/she has published here is simply astounding. This story, Patch of the Chosen, Too far gone, Ask no questions... There REALLY should be a warning on the first page of those stories: "Try not to like it. It's been abandoned since 2019".

(5/4/2022) Are you kidding me?! The end made no sense. This story was neither erotic nor romantic, IMO. So she rubbed his cock and balls thru his jeans and he was shocked; so what. Were you planning on four more pages of introspection then cap it off with a tumble in his bed but got bored? I sure did. This is one of the times I felt I needed to be brutally honest. This was four pages of introspection conversations and a boatload of loose ends. I did not like this story. Two stars from me.

You build it and build it and then you stick a period on it. Where is the rest of it?

When are they going to fuck already?

Question: Would y'all be mad if I rewrote this story into the romance category. I really have plans for this one, but it will take away from some things and add other? I'm asking here

Shaide87 some will probably be disappointed, but it's your story, your artistic vision

Answer: I came across this story shortly after you first wrote it, and have checked back multiple times since then to see if you wrote more. Do what you gotta do. I just want to see it continue.

Don’t care what category it’s in just finish the damn story

Subtracted a star for every year due to the story not getting a second chapter, which is sad because it was, in my opinion, a 5 star story. Since the author can't be bothered to make another chapter, I won't bother reading this authors stories any further.

To the writer if you ever decide to finish it you need to keep it in the incest catagory this 1 wasn't incest you can have romance as the subcategory but the main category needs to be incest since you dropped the ball with this 1 being in the wrong catagory i cant believe im going to say this but with the start of it and the way the norm is on this site this story would have been more fit for the loving wife category since the stories there seems to be mostly about a cheating wife however it is now 2023 this wrote in 2019 i don't think we will ever see another chapter to this which sucks cause even though it was in the wrong catagory it was still a good story that was left unfinished

No part 2? Too good not to finish

You have to continue the story. How does Sara win and show Lisa how badly she F'ed up? I know it's nearly 5 years later, but we want to read the rest of the story.