All Comments on 'Experiences at the Surgery Pt. 03'

@Bad Form: that's actually not true. Jane said that she wanted to use her safeword, but Marion urged her not to, and she did not. This was stretching boundaries,

Nice story!

Marion broke a cardinal rule, Jane used her safe word and she refused to stop. This just isn't done.

But very well done.

Thank you.

I read all three chapters in one continuous, engrossing stretch. You have weaved and built this up in an amazing manner. Will eagerly wait for your fourth chapter.

I really like your style and the setup of your story, it hits many of the kinks i like and i hope you write much more very soon!

greetings from germany

I love your writing skill and style. The characterisation is very well done.

I hope you continue with the series.