All Comments on 'Experiments With A Hot Latina Ch. 01'

by Hot_Luvrz

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Reverse_CowboyReverse_Cowboyabout 12 years ago
I liked it a lot but...

You have a lot of typos and it detracts from the story. Proof read a little more or get someone else to help you with it. Overall it was a very enjoyable story.

Hot_LuvrzHot_Luvrzabout 12 years agoAuthor
If you want to read more in this series....

you can find 6+ chapters at... http://stories.xnxx.com. Just search for "Sexual experiments with a hot young latina" in the Latina category.

This site totally sucks as it takes over a week to get a story reviewed and then if the punctuation police decide that they don't like it that you misplaced comma or period, the story gets rejected and then you have to resubmit and wait again.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Absolutely love this story. Easy five stars and I never caught a single typo. Fucking hot!

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