by MSSD
Kept me interested despite the lack of anything explicit. Looking forward to the future.
Very close to my perception of what it would feel like to be in that position. Impressive!
It was realistic and had surprises in it. It was a very good start with lots of opportunity for future plot lines, and is mysterious enough to bring the reader back drooling for more. Good Job!
I really liked the reversal in this. Instead of hot babe being checked out by male magazine exec, it's hot guy...love how in control the women were in this.
Very hot. Thanks. :)
Saucy