All Comments on 'Exposed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nicely done

Kept me interested despite the lack of anything explicit. Looking forward to the future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Happy reader

Nice beginning. I can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very nice tease

Very close to my perception of what it would feel like to be in that position. Impressive!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Interesting Story

It was realistic and had surprises in it. It was a very good start with lots of opportunity for future plot lines, and is mysterious enough to bring the reader back drooling for more. Good Job!

saucyvoxsaucyvoxalmost 19 years ago
Hot. :)

I really liked the reversal in this. Instead of hot babe being checked out by male magazine exec, it's hot guy...love how in control the women were in this.

Very hot. Thanks. :)

Saucy

lisablissfullisablissfulabout 4 years ago
Needed more

Lacked something needed that bit more

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