All Comments on 'Exposure Ch. 01'

Enjoying this so far .....

It would seem to be an exciting nudist family. And I’m just guessing with so many writers like shaved pussies please let at least the mother have ample pubic hair.

Well that was extremely boring. This is an erotica site. Choosing nudity lifestyle is not erotica.

There is nothing here that suggest taboo or incest. there is a catagory for non-erotica.

even if you choose in your next chapter to include incest / taboo that chapter could then be in that catagory. I would suggest that there be something of a hook to your story, as of right now have no interest in reading any further. Carry on.....

It's a strong start. I would be interested in seeing where it goes next

Where is the rest of the story?

You write poorly and expect the reader to do more work on reading than you've chosen to do on the typing.

It is typing. It's not writing.

You mention a sister a few paragraphs, with one word, then a few paragraphs later, after talking at length about a mom, you say something about 'them both'. I had to go back and re-read the entire thing to see who exactly both of them were.

At the start of a paragraph, you mention 'the subject' about a subject you had not mentioned to anyone, not even the readers, before that. Maybe you felt like you had mentioned it, or maybe you were trying to be cutesy. It didn't work. It was annoying as hell that you waited until later in that paragraph to say what that subject was.

I stopped then because I didn't want to experience any more of what you consider writing and is actually just badly trying to tell a story.

It is bad. It is boring. It is frustrating. It is a waste of time.

All preamble and no story....

Extremely nice start, but I expected more within the first chapter. This should be in the Non-Erotic category. I even had some popcorn while I read it. Still looking forward to the other chapters though.

I enjoyed it tremendously and I'm looking forward to more.😋 5 🌟

But let me reassure you though after reading the comments. The horrible crime that you committed was that you were writing erotica and most people are here just for the smutt. So don't let them get you down.

Disconnected and boring...sorry

It`s starting off ok,,,I feel it will get better in other chapters...

I thought it was a good beginning. I hope to see more chapters. 5stars

Just an average story so far all talk and no action 3 stars

There is nothing erotic about nudism. Also this MC is a weirdo. Going nude because he wants to own less things? But when he goes out, he still needs clothes so he still owns them. Do they materialize around him like the Iron man suit? The whole nudist thing doesn't make sense.