All Comments on 'Express Lane Ch. 07'

It has been a long time coming for this story, but the end did it great justice, great job! Everything flowed from start to finished, I will be looking for future work from you

A great story, excellent plot, lovable characters. You are quite talented and I definitely enjoyed this one... Thank you!!!

great ending, now jo needs a story

Really loved this story it was great sorry to see it go but happy you were able to come back and finish it for us thanks a lot will be checking out what else you're writing soon!!

i've enjoyed following this story, i'm so pleased i wasn't here when u first started using this site lol, anyways, i tend to disagree with the other readers, the last chapter at the beginning was a let down (don't get me wrong, i definitely liked the outcome), however, i reckon the first part was rushed just to get the story over with... and the reason i say this is because he was away for 6mths right, so in that time he woulda been sharing the bed with the girl, and her being spoilt rotten, would not have let him get away with what he did, she would've gotten even somehow since he left her. right? lol

You are partially right and I respect your opinion. I have a new series coming out and as much as I loved Larissa and Noah, I wanted it to end in a nice way. The first part was sorta rushed because a new semester of school started last week and I wanted to get this story posted before then.

That and Larissa and Noah make such a cute couple, I didn't want anything else dysfunctional to go on with them. I'm saving that for my next heroine. :-)

I promise, no more rushed series/chapters!

I enjoyed this story you created. It was a wonderful story.

this was a truly lovely story...

thank you

Thanks for ending the story on a happy note. I am glad Noah and Larissa are making a life and a family together. I am glad Rory is happy, because he could have been a little monster! You are going to be one of the great one's on this site. Keep up the good work!

Great Story!!!!!

Thanks for this!

Loved everything allot the story except the baby name. Lol

OMG I FREAKIN LOVED THIS STORY! ESPECIALLY NOAH! I LOVE GUYS LIKE HIM THE LOOKS AND EVERYTHING YOU DISCRIBED ABOUT HIM!!♡♡ GOOD JOB! PLEASE MAKE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS!!!

Anticlimactic but at least you finished it so kudos