All Comments on 'Extended Family Pt. 01'

his gf is his sister

I don't know if I completely like how Brook and Ainsley's relationship is shaping up, feels a little too bossy too much of a sudden.

Red hot and spicy! Keep going. Drama is just starting and has potential to be immense and super intense.

Loved it. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Excellent writing. He needs to look up and nail little sister. If he hasn't already. (Ainsley)

Dewey Cheatham

Thank you all for the nice comments. I appreciate everyone enjoyed the twist at the end of "Characters" but I will say that Ainsley is not Jonah's half sister. That doesn't mean I won't find a surprise so stay tuned.

I also appreciate that readers mentioned Brooke's interaction with Ainsley. I was a bit taken back at how much she went into that role after telling Jonah to be careful around her. Brooke told us in "Characters" that she doesn't always make the best decisions so this may have been one where she overdid it; I don't know yet. I'm not halfway through part two but it feels like everyone has been going overboard in the house.

Very risky behavior all the way around so we'll see.

Good job, and thanks for sharing