by lovefeelingslutty
write for what you want to write. some things will be good and some not so good but you will get better. keep at it. i suggest you quit reading comments if they bother you too much. writier write, people who will not leave a name and have never written anything should not cause you to stop writing.
Hot story, i liked it. The way it ended was really sudden though... maybe there will be a part 2?
I certainly hope so.;)