All Comments on 'Extra Credit'

Not sure where you're going to go from here, but I look forward to it.

Was great until you brought the kids thing into it. They ruined it.

Well Written Story, The Ending Seemed Ruahed ... The Title of The Comment Refers To When She Sits In His Office, How Can She See His Growing Bulge Through The Desk ?

How about trying to read the entire story..she says the teacher came in and sat ON the desk. Not behind it.

The main thing that bothered me was the line in the middle "Quiet bitch..." That was not the personality you set up for him at all, and it was jarring. It certainly took me out of the story. It's not that I don't like vulgarity, but it didn't seem to fit him.