by ShyAzn
What a beautifully crafted tale- the relationship was set up so well, and the initial kiss caught me off guard- well done!
The sex was exquisite, very sensual. The ending practically brought tears to my eyes. Very sensitive writing. Thank you!
As a student I find the prospect of such a relationship very erotic. Well done.
The storyline i thought was great...suspense was built up nicely. However, the first page dragged on too much about the girl's problems...it got a little boring. And there could have been a bit more detail during the climax. Other than that, I thought it was very pleasurable :)
This was perfectly written. The lead up story was just right, and gave a reason for the two being there. The boss coming as soon as they were "finished" was great timing. It seems that would typically happen. And her leaving asap was classic. What girl would stay there after the boss visited?