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Then focusing on Ellie's fingers tugging on her exposed nipple. "... Another toy from Dallas.
"What do you think of that, Ellie?"
The women turned her head briefly at the TV screen, shrugged and then went back to playing with Jess's genitalia. Although Ally was still engaged with Ellie's labia, she was watching the TV screen the whole time.
"Aw, come on babe," Jess signaled her toy to meet her mouth, and Ellie glided up the girl's semi naked body and the two kissed for several seconds. "Mm, you taste good."
"You suck on me so much, it's like I'm kissing myself!" And Jess gave the woman's nose a quick peck.
"No, really, hon. Which girl would you like to join our little harem?"
Jess pulled up the internet on the top half of the TV with Dallas Cheerleaders picture, while the show played out on the bottom half. The girl cycled through each Dallas girl until Ellie saw the girl she wanted and pointed at the TV.
"Her."
"OK, let's see. Chelsie Walker." Jess quickly kissed her lover. "Is that who we want? (*kiss*), huh?"
Ellie nodded, and then slid down back to her comfortable station, and back on Ally's cooing mouth.
"Alright then!"
- COMMENTS
Writer345over 6 years agoI enjoyed the story - its given me a few ideas for one of my own!
Jezalaneover 6 years agoI enjoyed this but I think the training was a more erotic than the writing. The good news for a relatively new writer is erotic ideas are harder to develop than writing skills. I was less excited by the last section and think you would have been better off continuing talking about the transition from training to slave in the first person. It would add emotional context.
Keep at it, you'll only get better.
jenorma2012over 6 years agoTo me this story made no sense at all, to go through all that trouble
