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All Comments on 'Eye in the Sky Bk 02: Artifact Ch. 04'

by blackrandl1958

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brownmobbrownmobover 3 years ago
Too short (not enough), Too slow (not quick enough), Too good (damn this is a good story)

Hurry up, cant wait for the link up with Sawyer and co

HighpikeHighpikeover 3 years ago
Great stuff

Keep it coming Randi.

hornier_bastardhornier_bastardover 3 years ago

I'm completely sucked into the story. I like how there's a subtle nod to the first book... I was wondering when that was going to show up :)

rodryder44rodryder44over 3 years ago

Now we're moving nicely. This is becoming Raiders-of-the-last-arkish, which is just grand for my tastes. More people to share the nude beach, too

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story, please continue

I hope you continue this story on this site. It stopped on another.

The_Sheppards_CorrectionThe_Sheppards_Correctionover 2 years ago

Excellent! Now we begin to mesh with the initial book. Corrupt agencies, “the girl and international condemnation. Nice! Finn

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sheesh. What kind of AI has such a hard-on for Apple computers, eh?

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I find it necessary to make some statement. I own my stories. They belong to me. I created them, the plot, the characters, the dialogue, the narration, all created by me. I retain copyright to them. No one has my permission to duplicate parts or all of my stories, either in te...