All Comments on 'Eyeing Raven'

Good story. Loved the ending!

5 stars just for the ending. Well done as usual.

Beginning-middle-end This is it for most stories. However some stories start at the beginning...swiftly pass through the middle and then morph into a new soon to be explored new beginning. That's known as life. Sometimes we are only allowed to see a slice.

Bwahahahaha....

Oh dear. Carping misguided criticism again. Who says a story must have an ending? Have you not heard of author's intention. What I the author of this original piece of fiction gave you, intentionally, was a slice in the life of a couple coming together - not the complete life of being together. If you crave for an ending, imagine one or go back to reading comics.

How sad that an author's response to readers hoping for a story to continue is to accuse them of "carping".

I have generally enjoyed your stories, so I find this attitude disappointing

it reminds my of how I remember the child of a past lover, but not the lover. The child loved to have me read to her and now has a chile of her own