All Comments on 'Eyes Wide Open'

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Absolutely hot story of father making her His

I liked it. Job well done for a first story. I would love to read what happens next if you chose to continue this story.

the story was okay, but a little rushed, and the tense change midway through was very distracting. more build up would have been nice too.

Well that escalated quickly! Better than many though, better than many.

The vast majority of girls/women experience considerable pain when their hymen is broken. In your story Jesdica had no reaction st all.

So good to read a story where a father just gets on with fucking his daughter's pussy with no messing about.

1) Peak is the top or summit.

Peek is a quick, or furtive look

2) If you are writing in past tense, STAY in past tense. Switching tenses is very irritating.

Choppy writing style