All Comments on 'F.E.T.I.S.H. Ray Tales Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

excellent story

Maybe Brian could turn Amy in to his submissive little slut or for even more fun make Stephanie, Taylor, and Rachel his equally willing little very, very submissive bondage loving sluts for him and Sam.

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Pretty good concept but kinda rushed m

Scorpio1952 almost 4 years ago

securing the ray

Great story you should have Brian buy a large enough heavy duty safe in which he can keep the ray gun secure since only he will have the combination. That way only he can allow future changes to be made as he thinks fit.

Kevlar_007 almost 4 years ago

Excellent evolution

Of the concept, and execution. Enjoy most of the moments but wish that they had been more drawn out. Please keep writing. Have enjoyed your last several stories

Anonymous6 months ago

Why can’t I have friends like this? :(

You write extremely well!

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I write short, erotic stories that heavily feature a loss of control. These are usually told with a focus on the victim, and often the events of the story will be the unintended consequences of the victim's own actions. I try to post a story or new chapter at least once every ...

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