All Comments on 'Facial / Cream'

Unbelievably hot. I both loved the ending but also would love a continuation.

Creative story, well written. Well done!

A series sounds like great fun. Lots of opportunities

Absolutely loved the slow build up! Given how descriptive and creative you were with only a blowjob I can only imagine how absolutely hot you could make an entire series! I'll definitely be checking out your other work after this, I absolutely loved it!

Please make this into a continued story. I loved it

This should definitely be a series, especially after the “both holes” comment by the mother.

Erotic. Exciting. Yes, make it a series.

Good 3⭐️ story so far if you continue with this then they need to get closer together and possibly fall into a relationship with each other as lovers and go from there. Just don’t bring in the neighbor

Your choice

By all means please continue this story as a possible series. You write very well.

Loved how believable this was, and the slow build up of attraction/losing inhibitions. I'd love to read more about this mom/son!

very hot story loved it.

I thought it was a great beginning to another wonderful series. I sincerely hope you continue it. I absolutely loved you first series with Nora, and experienced a multitude of emotions while reading it. I'm wholly expecting to feel the same way should you chose to continue. 5⭐ Rafe

Really exciting story. Five stars from me.

I really enjoyed the way you build the storyline. By all means, please continue it as a series.

Hi Fake Flower,

I really enjoyed reading this story, and hope you continue the series with a few more installments.

The progression was great, and the characters are fantastic.

Peace.

You really need to ask if further chapters would be appreciated?

Just to be clear:

a) fuck, yeah;

b) there should probably be a limit to the de-aging process;

c) is Jessica’s rejuvenation due to close genetic relationship? If not, does she needy to join Cassie in protocol maintenance?

Nice start! 5/5

If you are going to write such unrealistic scenarios, why even bother fleshing out the story? Whats the point of the mom seem "real" if the premise of the story is so bad.

For example in the end you could have made it so that Jessica just wanted to see Mom become slutty and use the cum story to trick her. Even that would be more believable than reversing age by 10 years by giving blowjob.

I guess the apparantly 50 year old fake titted botoxed up porn MILFs must be 100 or 150 year courtesy of all the facials and swallowing

absolutely great story. please do not stop.!!!

keep going and turn it into one of the best series ever

You can't drop that bomb and leave it there.

Definitely continue here is hoping that to continue the treatment she needs a daily dose on her face and for complete effect she needs a nightly load in her pussy. With time I hope she finds herself pregnant and to avoid stretch marks needs another load all over her pregnant belly and breasts. Loved this naughty tale

Great story and do please write other chapters can’t wait to read more of this!!

Yes, by all means, continue. First, ignore the anonymous assholes who aren't brave enough to sign their names. Great buildup, leaving us readers with many ideas for the next chapter(s).

This leaves off at a place that definitely needs another part. This was amazing so far!

Fantastic story. Definitely continue it. Looking forward to it!

Please do continue it as a series. Maybe add some breast growth as one of the "additional tricks"? Maybe the main character needs bigger or more loads to make the changes as quickly as his mother wants them so he has to get some supplements or change his diet to cum more? There's definitely places you could go with it.

this is great. MOAR!

Yes. Please. More! Awesome. Thank you

Please add another chapter! I love how the mother is so sweet and has such pure intentions - though it's natural she starts to enjoy it|! Great story - usually I prefer the buildup and dont enjoy the actual sex but this is good because of her apprehension!

Oh hell yes, make it a series. And I see I'm far from alone. Both holes sounds promising. And Jessica may even espouse how great pussy juice is for the complexion. This really was a hot story, but as you mentioned in the intro, it was also very well written. 5/5 stars

Dewey Cheatham

More chapters are needed. Jessica and mom must experience receiving semen together.

that was so hot! More, please!

More!

GREAT work! Five star story, without a doubt, yet it does feel incomplete. I do hope you will continue this story as there still are arcs that are still in the air, not to mention the mother's sexuality having been awaken without fulfillment. I will be looking into your other stories for sure. Bloody well done.

Please more. Great story as always from you.

Definitely continue the story!

Great start, would love to see a longer series!

Extremely well written- looking forward to more adventures

Welp, now I'm invested. In the words of Kylo Ren, "MORE!"

Great story! Finally a son that isn't a dirty degenerate, ready to take advantage of his mom at every opportunity! 5/5

One of the few things that would've made it even better imo is if took them longer to get into it, with the mom doing more convincing while the son tries to gently talk her out of it, and more uncertainty from them both. Would've also been nice to have her slowly getting into it as they do it described in more detail.

more baby more.

As the saying in Oliver Twist goes, "please sir, can I have some more sir". You absolutely have to give us another chapter.

Yes, more !!

Hot as Hell, and I'm passing this info too many wife because she's getting to many wrinkles. More please! 5*****

Very well written, I think you should write at least one more chapter.

please do!

Amazing job writing! How long do we have to wait for part II?!

Wow! Please keep going!

I loved this story, please continue!

This was a very sexy story to read. Please add another chapter or 2. We NEED to see where this goes.

Loved it! You should absolutely make this into a series. Your other series was well written, completely erotic, and so so hot. Thanks!

Please continue.

Yes, Story is so hot and well written, this should become a series. You describe the actual facial so realistic, so hot, please continue

I thought this was a great story. A crazy idea, sure, but still a lot of fun to read. I would love to read another chapter.

Please, for the love of God, make this a series 😂

I hope you write a sequel!

Love it, want more, please continue this story.

You should absolutely continue this story.

This was hot. Yes, please keep the story going. We have to read about both holes getting filled.

As believable you say? Yeah as believable as my story about pussy juice getting rid of acne.

Yes!!! Write more!!! :-D

I liked that the mother wasn't a slut and I'd like that if the story continues she didn't turn into one. I also liked that the son wasn't the typical degenerate.

Yes please, MORE!

Great story, would definitely want more. However, it sped up a lot towards the end. I think you could set a steadier pace and slow down the progression a little bit. Add some more descriptions and let the story breathe.

Love it. Great story. Just the kind I like. Definitely keep it coming.

Great story!Please continue it.

It was a fantastic read, I loved it. Worth continuing, in my opinion. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. ^__^

Great story! Continuation? Absolutely! If this turns out anywhere near as good as the Nora series, you'll have a lot more fan adding you to their favorites list. 5⭐ Rafe

Really liked it! Be great to continue it!

This is by far, one of the very best taboo Mother and Son stories I've read on this or any other site. It is well written and very believable to me. I hope the author continues to add additional chapters.

Definitely should continue. Keep it slow, keep her demure, keep him unsure.

Wow. Superb composition. Thank you ff

If you don't continue this story I'll kill myself, well not really, but please keep going. Keep mom as a good loving mom not a slut and loving son not a prick.

I really liked this story, I think you had a great angle with the slow burn and gentle reluctance of both of them. The tone of the mom was just right, interested enough to encourage but not a raving nympho as soon as anything happened between them. I'd love to see this story continue, and will be reading your other works too.

By all means, you should. Your characters are all setup to continue their exploration with each other. I’m sure as the mother is on the phone with her friend, finding out what else needs to happen to help keep her youthful appearance, being told she’ll need to sleep with her son…yep, her pussy’s already getting wet!!

A part two, I’m sure will be very welcome by your fans.

I don’t know if you have finished with this idea, but it would indeed make a great series. The mom’s reluctant fascination with the whole thing is extremely erotic.

You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it.

I do hope you will continue this story. It will be a another 5-star masterpiece.

very very good! please continue this story

Full series man

Gasp gasp gasp and phew. So good. More ASAP

Definitely , great story . It's a red hot story .

Do continue.great story as expected of you

Holy shit, that was hot. There's probably at least room for a few more chapters to follow on to the prediction at the ending. Great stuff!

You have amazing writing talent. Please continue with this story.

Please by all means continue this story.

please continue

An exciting and stimulating story, it needs to be continued until they sleep together

Yes, please continue!

Just wanted to say that Ive bought and read all your stories on smashwords. Fantastic work every single one of them. Looking forward to the next chapter of parent trap. Thanks for the great stories.

Next segment please . . . .

Is it going to be like those Netflix's series..... ended in the cliffhanger and there's no update about the upcoming season (if not cancelled) 😢....plzzz give a an update 🤞