All Comments on 'Failing Upward Ch. 02'

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WatercrazyWatercrazyabout 15 years ago
interesting

I cant wait to read more of this.

punkin1077punkin1077about 15 years ago
this is getting...

very interesting now...i didn't realize from the first chapter that he hasn't figured out he's gay yet...this should be fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
decent start

A decent start I think. I read both chapters and encourage you to continue. You definitely have writing ability. And even though this story is getting off to a slower start than the "average" Literotica short story, I think you're doing a good job. Can't wait for the sex to start though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hmmmmm

Confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

A little confusing, but the big surprise is that he really doesn't think he's gay. Wow.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 10 years ago
Confusing but amusing

I have read the first two chapters and have found myself, confused and laughing in regards to Wes and his issues. It is not a good thing about his accident and that they think he was on drugs and just as a point of interest, you make note of the fact that he was in hospital and he was in pain from the thorn why has no one seen nor taken it out? Obviously more will be revealed but that is where the toxins came from and I hope he gets better soon.

Even I could tell he is in way too much denial lol

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