All Comments on 'Failing Upward Ch. 06'

made me have a lot of questions, which makes me can't wait for the next chapter which is always great! keep up the good work.

I have read each chp with much interest and built up quite a head of steam for the romance and intrigue that was developing. I find the story line and your imagination shit hot you must be well and truly shattered after a writing spell, however I would like to suggest a few criticisms as well. You have traditionally used two pages per chapter 4 is too much . It takes time to assimilate. Its ok if its just rutting but the numbers of characters in your story increases the complexity Your spelling let you down at times It distracts. THe sex bit is not always easily integrated in the body of the story and at time seems a trifle queeny and petulant. I trust comments dont offend. Conceptrol new to me i would not trust as a spermicidal. Have been in the medical industry for 37years and dont want folk to think the next panacea has arrived to avoid HIV. In my country our future president Jacob Zuma blindly and lustfully slept with someome who is +ve and took a shower to rid himslf of the virus. All cartoons now show him with asmall shower spray over his head.

I have read each chp with much interest and built up quite a head of steam for the romance and intrigue that was developing. I find the story line and your imagination shit hot you must be well and truly shattered after a writing spell, however I would like to suggest a few criticisms as well. You have traditionally used two pages per chapter 4 is too much . It takes time to assimilate. Its ok if its just rutting but the numbers of characters in your story increases the complexity Your spelling let you down at times It distracts. THe sex bit is not always easily integrated in the body of the story and at time seems a trifle queeny and petulant. I trust comments dont offend. Conceptrol new to me i would not trust as a spermicidal. Have been in the medical industry for 37years and dont want folk to think the next panacea has arrived to avoid HIV. In my country our future president Jacob Zuma blindly and lustfully slept with someome who is +ve and took a shower to rid himslf of the virus. All cartoons now show him with asmall shower spray over his head.

I have read each chp with much interest and built up quite a head of steam for the romance and intrigue that was developing. I find the story line and your imagination shit hot you must be well and truly shattered after a writing spell, however I would like to suggest a few criticisms as well. You have traditionally used two pages per chapter 4 is too much . It takes time to assimilate. Its ok if its just rutting but the numbers of characters in your story increases the complexity Your spelling let you down at times It distracts. THe sex bit is not always easily integrated in the body of the story and at time seems a trifle queeny and petulant. I trust comments dont offend. Conceptrol new to me i would not trust as a spermicidal. Have been in the medical industry for 37years and dont want folk to think the next panacea has arrived to avoid HIV. In my country our future president Jacob Zuma blindly and lustfully slept with someome who is +ve and took a shower to rid himslf of the virus. All cartoons now show him with asmall shower spray over his head.

Sorry tired and somewhat intoxicated by booze and story so hit button three times.

Beautiful chapter. Please let them be together and... dont kill Sid....i really like that guy - sweet and smart.

I look forward to reading more of this story....one question though who is Shackleton?

ok, i seriously just sat here and read every installment of this story, and boy is it fantastic. the slow build, all the intrigue, and not knowing what's coming is such a refreshing change. wes is a real guy, he fucks up, he's human (even if not really) which, in a romance story, can be a rarity. like the last poster though i did feel like i missed something at the beginning of ch 10. one second they're in bed together and the next the cops have been called and they're freaking out over some new character?? hmm. no matter what though, i can't wait for the next installment.

Sorry about the Shackleton mix up. I realized, too late, that I copy and pasted part of a chapter out of order. It goes before the section called Knock, Knock. Wes has a run in with Shackleton (and it's not so nice). A bit of implied non-con in that section. Wes also wonders about his relationship with Sid in it too. This missing piece should be posted along with the next chapters in a couple of days...

I could see how freaked out Wes would be about Sid, but what's up with all the sexy feelings? I don't think it's just their relationship.