All Comments on 'Failing Upward Ch. 13'

I love the complications! This story is so interesting and the relationships are so well realized. I'm going to have to reread some of the earlier chapters to get my head straight, but it's worth it.

"I was more confused than when I started."

So am I.

please tell me there is more to come. Wes and Sid are perfect together and have to get back together. please dont let this be the end.

This is not the end. Much more story to come...

more confused, too. I liked it a lot to start with but now I just don't get it.

Started out loving this story for all the right reasons but due to my limited attention span and trying to cope with all the shifts and twists I have got lost. Need to now motivate myself to read all the submissions in one go Think this is more non human or some other category

I think you are supposed to be confused, as Wes is confused himself.

A good writer should be able to make the reader feel the way the antagonist feels, if you feel confused then it's because Wes is confused.

Also to add: I love this story. It's moved from a much happier place to what is now a sad one, but having not read all of the chapters (as of yet) I am certain it will pick itself up again.

How awful to be buried alive and never die! Ang giving up the man you love just to protect him from a psych. Yeah it's all excellent- this story is making my head hurt but in a good way.