All Comments on 'Fair Exchange'

WTF?

This has to be the most fucked up mess I have ever read............

I got it. It had a dreamlike quality to it, almost Native American in flavor. Probably a bit too esoteric for most people to comprehend, though. If not for the graphic sexual aspects, I could imagine this showing up in a sci-fi magazine or something. Maybe if you tone the sexual content down just a tiny bit, make it less graphic, you could sell it to something like Analog Science Fiction & Fact. You could do worse than to try.

and makes no sense.

A few things...

This, in NO WAY, SHAPE OR FORM, belongs in the Incest/Taboo category... why you ask? Simple really, considering the majority of the sex scenes described (key word there) where NonConsent, thats where you should have stuck it, NonConsent/Reluctance...

I "might" have been able to say maybe non-human, but when you traumatize a kid into thinking her father RAPED her causing both of them extreme mental anguish...

NON-CONSENT/RELUCTANCE

I "might" also suggest you get your head examined

This is truly a piece of s...!

strokes for different folks. I enjoyed it enough to overlook the occasional missing word or phrase. It could have been crafted better but was sufficiently unique to keep me guessing until the end.

did I waste 5 minutes of my life (that I can't get back) on? Stop writing.

it was different and got my interest good work

Better get a real job

were you on drugs...what a waste of time

I want back the time I wasted reading this!

Occasionally, an artist or an author approaches an esoteric concept through an ethereal, dreamlike approach and he or she produces a work of art which is beautiful but under-appreciated because it is misunderstood. Sometimes, an artist or an author produces a work which is nothing more than stupid shit. This work is in the second category.

this would be better in the FANTASY AREA.

I think I may be in love.

this belongs in the NONHUMAN area not here idiot.

I agree that this story is a severe mindwarp. It seems to follow a couple of different narrative lines. I would agree, at first, that this belongs in a different category. However, I've since learned that stories with any incest element end up in I/T.

SILLY