All Comments on 'Fairview Motel'

Very interesting and fun read. But you really need to finish this story by showing us whose money they were laundering and who set up the spy cam, why, and what they were doing with the tapes, which I assume someone is keeping.

I totally agree with previous comment...follow this up ...it begs for a follow on. Well written.

Entertaining read. I want to know what happened to the Plain Jane adulteress with the ... well whatever the guy was. I agree with the narrator. She is a sex goddess. Much sexier than the painted cartoon characters on porn.