by LadyDaisy
Hallo LadyDaisy!
Hmm, well I stopped reading at (Male Prostitute Boy Toy),,, because male sex is not my thing and this definitely does not belong under (Lesbian Sex)!
SORRY.
Gay Kat.
Yes i agree...wrong category. I'm a lesbian and i come here to read about women who love women. I'm not interested in reading about guys cumming.
Sorry, I've got no "constructive" criticism for this chapter. It doesn't deserve any - it's an even bigger waste of five minutes than either of the previous two. Like the others, it reads as if it was written by a middle-school boy. I've gotten wetter from reading a laundry label.
Also, stories with FFM threesome scenes do *not* belong in Lesbian Sex - they belong in Group Sex. Know your audience. Most of us don't want to read about dicks and semen. Next time you publish - heaven forbid - get the category right.
...amazing....
...pile of crap.
This "story" was so poor and ridiculous that it actually made me me laugh.