All Comments on 'Fairy Summoning Pt. 02'

I knew you and I had something in common. Gabriella hall! Lol great to see you progressing on this one! Thanks for the floating bit!

Would love to see you expand on this story. Your other works touched on woman who could change form but you never quite went through far enough. Many possibilites

After your last story I'm sure this will be good as well

First off: I like it! Fairy and all: Great! I remember having read a book on gnomes and trolls and fearies when I was a kid, fearies being those tiny extremely sexy but naive spirits who by accident seduce humans to their doom. (Book was made like a scientific research report done by a field researcher who was observing all them mystical creatures, great read for kids, anyhow: can't remember the title.) When I grew up I still had this idea about tiny sexy beings being up for sex and fun. So you basically turned that into a story and I like it so far. Anyhow, please let somebody read and check your work before publishing. There were quite a number of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes in there, you also mixed up tenses now and then.

No matter how good the story line may be, the obvious errors which could have been easily corrected by proof reading, or using a human editor, interfere with enjoyment of it.

1. This story is a few years old, 2. My real fans enjoy them anyway, 3. I use Grammarly to write, do my own spell/grammar check, and Literotica does there own as well, and it's still never been good enough for you people who have to complain Anonymously.

I remember reading this one time so I came back to read again