All Comments on 'Fairy Tale Path'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Erotica found!

A couple head for a Secret Spot and find themselves making mad passionate love to each other. Adding to the excitement,after they're finished - they see a solitary figure slinking away. Enjoyable story!

DarkniciadDarkniciadover 17 years ago
Nice change

There are only so many ways you can describe a beach, so concentrating on the secret path before things get naughty amongst the sand and surf is a nice switch to make your story stand out. Well done!

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