All Comments on 'Faith, Hope and Charity'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well Done

Great story about the hypocrisy and corruption of man made religion. These disgusting people twist and distort the biblical faith and teachings to their own ends.

The sad thing is that theme of this story is most probably absolutely true and many many times repeated.

Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
not to your usual high standard

I've enjoyed your stories very much and given them all a five, just not this one, a mere three. What happened? Summer slump?

bruce22bruce22over 9 years ago
Interesting fun tour of a possiblity

I admit that I find it difficult to believe in conspiracies of this size but it was fun.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Hm seems unfinished in many ways and very rushed

The end was too scattered to be fully understood - at east by me -

There needed to be some closure for the men and even the women's group -

Questions abound -

Hoiw did Madeline get Grace to help hang the men?

What did happen to the Mayor for his p[art?

Who did the men end up with if anyone after this??

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