All Comments on 'Fall from Grace Ch. 02'

Hope you post more chapters to this.

I can really relate to her unsatisfactory marital sex. I've often fantasized of a Clay...

Please continue the story!! Great work! Thanks!

Liked the story a lot but not a fan of the abuse. Spitting in her face fucking her throat till she passes out. Not a fan of those types of things. Hope as you continue the story you focus more on her need for his big cock and his aggressive fucking that she wants and needs and shy away from him abusing her just because.

This is getting better, I also love your picture too.

You are an excellent writer with a great voice but if this is a true story it's extremely sad you were so badly degraded by such a terrible person! This was not a turn on in the least but very disturbing. Written as a autobiography the story would have way more merit. I'm not judging so please don't take this the wrong way. I hope writing this provides a cathartic release and you might consider counseling. Please keep writing but know this is terrible abuse not erotica, IMO

The story is a really turn-on. Totally out of control... In an upward spiral like a roman candle. The following chapters will include his other girlfriends and a threesome. I decided that before I read the "Promises." But please write the others chapters.

It helps me deal with my wife's experiences an lies. Read my comments on it comparing the two stories. PM me.

She is developing and maturing with every thrust of his monster cock. He wants more. She is learning to need more. Erotic pain and abuse are acquired tastes. And she likes the taste a lot.

Love the pace and intensity of the story. Minor grammatical errors. (My, not me. Slide, not slid) You’ll find your way.

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Before I read part 3, I hope he takes her to a bar where she drinks her first alcohol getting her drunk, putting her to work with is friends.