All Comments on 'Fallen Angel'

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DaddysgirlflDaddysgirlfl9 months ago

Nicely done. Very nicely done. From the phone call where I was saying, 'nooooo don't do it' you sucked me in, and I felt every welt. Not being into pain myself, I admired your more mature way of handling it. lol You're a great writer. You yank us right into your story, whether we want to be or not. Waiting for more....

StrappySandalsStrappySandals8 months ago

Nice, erotic, and slightly scary… An amateur psychologist you must be, as Magdalene clearly has some issues. But at the end, she seems happy that her quirks have been discovered. Well done!!

StrappySandalsStrappySandals8 months ago

And, needless to say, the strappy heels were an awful nice touch!!

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