All Comments on 'Fallen Angel Ch. 06'

Why must She refuse to tell him she loves him!!! Loved the story yet again!! Excitedly awaiting a new update!

This story is really good. I can't wait for the next chapters.!! Oh the agony...

Ok, I really thought that 5 was starting after he had taken her virginity and sent her away. The way it read, it seemed that way. I'm glad you let us be there for such an important part. You may want to look at the beginning of 5. Maybe be clear she was still in the cottage and that he was taking time to think/get revenge...something to explain why he took the side trip to the cave and the demons then when he seemed to be in a hurry to have her sent back to Earth.

Great story. It really is done well in terms of character development and the play of emotions. Lookin forward to the next ch.

I liked this chapter. Very nice.