All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 17'

Can't wait for more I really enjoy reading this story , the characters are amazing I love bridge , PLZE don't kill him off , he is my favorite out of all them , his character is so beautiful.....looking forward to reading more

Are we reading the same story? Because the one I'm reading is beautifully written, magical and hypnotic.

Another beautiful, mesmerising chapter, I love this story.

Anonymous no-one is forcing you to read it are they? Typical keyboard warrior who doesn't have the guts to give a name when they post a derogatory comment!

but as always, too short...lol!! I love it, please keep going.

more more more... post it soon.

Absolutely brilliant I am so glad they are together onto the next....

You must have the greatest imagination ever. To have written something like this. It blows me away. Thank you keep up the good work!

What causes parents to turn into such creatures?