All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 20'

Even though the talk of wheels and spikes and oil drops hurt my head a little, I'm anxious to find out what's next! But I would be happy to wait if it meant a longer chapter (hint hint). Interesting idea, the first four races ...

The more you write the more I want to read. I'm very excited to see what will happen next.

Awesome story that keeps getting more complicated but better at the same time.

Damn this just gets better and better. I love the ideas you introduced in this chapter. This story bleeds amazing awesomeness. :)

I can't wait to see what happens next. To tell you the truth, I wasn't really into the story at first and I only read a glimpse of it, but then, when the later chapters came, that's when you really got me hooked onto this ;) I am in love with this storyline and YAY!! I can't wait to see how it ends :)

The end.... and now we have to wait geez!! I love these guys but can't wait for you to explain the urgency behind the ascension and what it is and means and will his mother have anything to do with it as Luma is not in favour.... will wait and see hehe soon please soon...

Next chapter with the editors. The clues as to why the ascension is so urgent are already there with those for eyes to see ;)